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She spends her time ballroom dancing with the dead,
And there isn't a dark tale she hasn't yet read.
She likes black dresses trimmed in matching lace,
Carries herself with a ghoulish sort of dainty grace.
She says that sad songs are what feed her soul,
While cemeteries are her favorite places to take a stroll.
You can see madness when you look in her eyes,
Perhaps even the spectre of your own demise.
And there is something so very odd about her kiss,
A feeling like some writhing thing come from a dark abyss.
An affection so beautiful yet so dark and so strange,
That with every touch I feel my mind derange.
It is true that I love her quite dearly,
But it's frightening that she knows death so clearly.
For sometimes when we lay side by side
To linger and laugh and let our souls collide,
I can feel my hold on reality beginning to waive
And I know she'll be the one to take me to my grave.
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:iconflamlessdragon:
awsome, i loved it XD
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:iconmacabrevampire:
~MacabreVampire Nov 5, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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~Namineswishes Oct 30, 2011  Student General Artist
This is beautiful. I love the descriptiveness (is that even a word? ah well) and I can picture her in my head perfectly. <3 Well done
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:iconmacabrevampire:
~MacabreVampire Oct 31, 2011  Student Writer
I do believe that's a word XD Thank you very much! :)
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~GlitterNarcotic Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
this is really great. c:
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:iconmacabrevampire:
~MacabreVampire Sep 23, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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~yngasctmagfi Aug 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wild a bit, its like you know my-her
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try not to lose that touch
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:iconmacabrevampire:
~MacabreVampire Aug 29, 2011  Student Writer
Ah, reminds you of someone you know, eh? ;)

Thanks! :D
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:iconyngasctmagfi:
~yngasctmagfi Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ohh yes, my 'dear lady', spot on :cough:
really though, this is a wonderful piece of writing. much respect :thumbsup:
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:iconkaitforest:
"i know she'll be the one to make my grave". love. lovelovelove. it flowed so beautifully. it is my absolute favorite
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